Project Spark Day 13 Update

Today, I wrote some more and I'm really liking Chapter 7. But, I stopped and thought, James has to have flaws. He can't be perfect. I think his flaw isb that he puts others ahead of himself. He tries to protect the ones he loves, but that's not possible sometimes... Also, the main problem in the comics were that villains were not developed well enough, and I think I've done it right, so far. Well, that's all!!!
Keep on sparking!!!
-Ivan